Pirate king poem

WHAT...what did you expect another Jack Sparrow drawing????

Okay maybe a little drawing but this is about my first poem I ever did in English OMG

I love to write them but because I'm Dutch and my English isin't that good I never tried one in English...

Although I'm much better with English now...when I look back at my old DA page it kinda SUCKS so bad ....

Anyway please understand I did my best to let it rhyme I really did, I spend 5 hours making the drawing, *Jack and the ship*

And another two for the Poem... I had much fun writing it...back in the garden of our new house whiiii and the weather was sooo nice. :flirty.

I'm also happy that Jack didn't came out Anime like at all I like drawings from him better this way...

Please don't be to hard on my Poem i know there might be words that I wrote wrong but this took me soooooo long....

Anyway I submit this twice one in Tradition art and one in Poetry

The Poem is about Jack Sparrow duhhh and the way I think about him, please tell me what you think I might write more then